Saturday, 22 November 2014

2014 Term 3 Writing

2014 Term 3 Writing

We are learning to:
write a description
use an iPad or Mac laptop to publish our writing
read our writing in a clear voice in front of an audience

We can do this when we can: 
use interesting words, write sentences that make sense, use describing words and edit and read our work.

Teacher Comment: 
You have used some good describing words.  Your next step is to add more to your writing.
I like the way you story created a picture in my mind.
I like the way your words match your mind map.

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